A Shutter’s Click

boy at lunch

in a shutter’s click,
the camera sees all the way through,

while life swirls around,
a coursing river of distraction,
and the child keeps changing,
sometimes distant, deceitful,

yet that moment remains,
a record of grace,
a testament of love,


Dan Colorado National Monument

Boy with tiger collage

About Marcy

I blog about trying to get out of my comfort zone, completing 101 things in 1001 days (and beyond), and writing my memoirs. My book: Timid No More.
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40 Responses to A Shutter’s Click

  1. Susan Shuman says:

    Very nice, Marcy. I love this one.
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  2. Wise words. I loved the metaphors you used. How did you do that?! 😉

  3. Jen says:

    awww this was really beautiful!
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  4. Karen says:

    This is really beautiful, Marcy. I love the part about the camera seeing all the way through.
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  5. I love the repetition of the “sometimes.” And that second stanza…oh, yes. You take us through a beautiful journey in these few words.
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    • Marcy says:

      Yes, a journey. When I used to look back on my childhood, it seems like it lasted so long, but my two sons are only a year apart, and their childhood years were so brief.

  6. Nortonmum says:

    Really enjoyed this, watching my boy go through changes now.
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  7. Stacie says:

    Very sweet and how true!
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  8. maria says:

    You’ve captured your boys, Marcy, in photo and verse. Beautiful! Maria
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  9. Abby says:

    Sweet! Words AND pics!

  10. Meg says:

    Marcy, I love this. It is precious and tender and fine. Great stuff.
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  11. Archita says:

    Beautiful, Marcy!
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  12. Sweet photos, sweet words!
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  13. Genna says:

    Beautiful Marcy!! I love the photograph bookends and well-crafted message.
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  14. Delightful! ‘.. a record of grace, a testament of love..’ – so well expressed.

  15. Bjorn says:

    Very tender — very sweet… a mother’s love
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  16. Nathan James says:

    the bookended “sometimes” gives me the impression that this is an observation that happens again and again. So thoughtful, Marcy, I’m a big fan!
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    • Marcy says:

      Thanks, Nathan! I do think about it a lot. I love photos and have a slideshow on my computer that flips through old photos in random order. One will catch me unawares and have a big impact.

  17. Christine says:

    Oh, I know this feeling so well. My boys are 3 and 5, and I feel like they’re already slipping away. My camera is my last-ditch effort to hold onto them. Very evocative, touching piece, Marcy. Thanks for sharing it!
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  18. Love it! 🙂
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  19. Katie says:

    I realize that this post is about poetry, but I must say that your son looks so much like you (just from seeing you via your blog)!
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  20. Catherine says:

    Aw, cute photos! Love the little poem too.
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