Piranha

La Fortuna Waterfall Costa RicaLittle fish
circled our feet.

“Piranha,” a local man said.

We laughed,
offending him.

We tried to explain:
No discordant violins
played as a horror scene
turned red.

Our apology lost in translation,
we watched and hoped
they wouldn’t take our flesh.

 

 

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About Marcy

I blog about trying to get out of my comfort zone, completing 101 things in 1001 days (and beyond), and writing my memoirs. My book: Timid No More.
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32 Responses to Piranha

  1. Christine says:

    Nice! I love the apology-gone-wrong, and the sudden shift from amusement to apprehension. Thanks for linking it up!
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  2. This makes me shudder! Ever since I watched the movie Jaws as a child, I have been cautious about water based predators! Good work!
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    • Marcy says:

      Jaws got me too. I was afraid to go in the ocean, like so many others. I watched some clips from the various Piranha movies when I was writing this–so gory. No wonder fresh water wasn’t safe anymore for me either for a while. Thanks for your comment.

  3. The culture barrier. 🙂 Love the last line.
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    • Marcy says:

      Thanks, Jennifer. Yes, the man definitely did not get why we reacted as we did. None of us had the Spanish to explain clearly.

  4. Mama Piranha are never far behind!
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    • Marcy says:

      I wasn’t familiar with them, but I just watched a “song diary” video on YouTube about their song “William.” Very cool–thanks!

  5. Rahmath says:

    Oh my goodness! This happened for real????
    Suddenly made me think of warnings in life that we laugh off and then remember them when they come true.

    • Marcy says:

      Well said, Rahmath. Yes, this happened to me in Costa Rica. I have dismissed warnings about the weather when hiking and then regretted it. I take those much more seriously now!

  6. TNKerr says:

    Well done. I know very well the frustration felt when the words are not there to convey what I want to say. You did not have that problem with this piece. You said it very well.

    • Marcy says:

      One of the things I love about returning home from a trip is how easy it is to communicate, for sure. Thank you, TNKerr.

  7. Nice job.
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  8. I feel like letting out a loud “WHYYY” in such situations. You had me hooked. I fear them too!
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  9. Kir says:

    I am a pool kind of girl for this reason…because you never what’s hiding in the water (or on land)

    better to apologize quickly.
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  10. Susan Shuman says:

    Yikes! Remind sme of the old movie, “Piranha.” Good write!
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  11. Oh, the downfalls of nervous laughter.
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    • Marcy says:

      We first laughed because we were thinking he was joking, and he got offended and said he doesn’t lie. We couldn’t quite explain it all to him in English/Spanish. That’s when we felt nervous with the fish still around our feet 🙂

  12. TMW Hickman says:

    I like this! Just enough of a question to make me nervous…
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  13. Natalie D says:

    Those pesky piranhas…
    I love reading about your adventures in mini, poetic glimpses like this! Lends them a whole new perspective.
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  14. Yup, just this kind of awkward that makes me feel needed (translator : ) Great story!
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    • Marcy says:

      Cool perspective–I hadn’t thought about it that way, but I have needed your services quite a few times. 🙂

  15. Meg says:

    Great slice of life, Marcy…glad it wasn’t your foot. Your writing is lovely.
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  16. Oooh, as several other commenters have said, that went from charming and light to creepy apprehension. Great job shifting the mood in so few words.
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